Prayer In A Comatose Stage

[deadpie]

When I come it feels like biting down on tin foil
I place my head down and your yeast smells like burning flesh
Put your feet up against the dashboard
Now I'm getting off to the wreckage
For every thrust and fuck I know you'll take and suck
It's like every chalk board I drag my nails against
Fondling a rusty nail and piercing it to my genitals
You make me harder than candle wax in my urethra

Your mouth tastes like iron and semen
Bite down on your tongue and swallow it whole
Fist down my throat and a boxcutter to my chest
She organizes her daggers and jokes to the guillotine
I caress her shedded skin as she's sawing off my head
"This is love after all", I whisper into her ears.
"Hand me over to the next harlot so we can repeat the process again."

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Obviously not my strongest piece, but I needed to write it. Had the lines in my head for weeks now.

[The Joker]

I caress her shedded skin as she's sawing off my head
"This is love after all", I whisper into her ears.

[TravM]

This certainly brightened up my early morning. That's really all I need to say.

[Magus]

I hope you got my pm. Honestly, not many will appreciate this kind of poetry.

I hope to see more of there.

Macabre to you too.

[Spook]

Interesting... :D Definately something new.

[Quick_Sylver]

I liked it Tim. :)