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DarkNick
March 22nd, 2011, 03:58 PM
You look yourself at the mirror..
What do you see?
Do you see a face full of lies?
Do you see the pain on your face?
The memories that hurt you so much...
Things that only death can take away?
Tell me...What do you see?

Iceman
March 22nd, 2011, 05:21 PM
You look yourself at the mirror..
What do you see?
Do you see a face full of lies?
Do you see the pain on your face?
The memories that hurt you so much...
Things that only death can take away?
Tell me...What do you see?

When I first saw this I read "P is for Palin" and I did this matter :lol:

But anyways good short poem.

BOBBY HILL
March 22nd, 2011, 08:09 PM
typical lame angsty teen poetry

DarkNick
March 24th, 2011, 05:05 PM
Thank you Socko. :)

Pasalaqcua since I have written it and it feels something to me it isn't lame at all...
Anyway thank you for your comment...