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Roses_Are_Yellow
March 14th, 2011, 10:28 PM
I want to die
I want to cry
I ask my self why

I hate this life
I hate my self
I can end it with a knife

I want to leave
I want to feel
Free

So maybe it will happen
But not today
Because everyone knows
Life can't go my way

Fruit_Tart.
March 15th, 2011, 12:42 AM
my exact same feelings on some days.
this is a great poem.
rhythm is on-going and the rhymes go great.
good job.
i really like this one.