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Origami
March 14th, 2011, 05:14 PM
C&C this to hell and back. I haven't proofread it yet, nor do I intend to. Random writing in approximately sixteen minutes.

Is it malfunction within your eyes
That betrays your heart's call?
Or your nonchalant bullshit egotism
Making you feel larger than us all?

Yes, you say you'll reign over everyone,
But truly, you'll rain in bloody remnant.
Half of what you believe you are,
You'll find we are not clement.

Yes, you've walked upon us,
Heavy stride upon broken spine,
But soon you'll come to find
That your heart was always mine.

StrongSilent
March 14th, 2011, 07:23 PM
Decent, I'd say. Especially considering you drafted this up in under 17 minutes.

Origami
March 14th, 2011, 07:32 PM
Decent, I'd say. Especially considering you drafted this up in under 17 minutes.

I do random tid-bits like this quite often. I seldom enjoy them, but they're useful for providing a few minutes of entertainment, if nothing else.

StrongSilent
March 14th, 2011, 08:14 PM
Useful for overcoming the occasional writers block.