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Roses_Are_Yellow
March 13th, 2011, 09:02 PM
You've got him, he's got you
No matter how much you don't see it
You two are meant to be together
You're too stubborn to admit

It's the perfect love story
Once best friends, that grew apart
Found each other once more
When is your relationship gonna start?

Her love story is complicated
Filled with confessions and heart break
All of his lies to her
Are causing her heart to ache

She swears she doesn't like him
I know she's lying
How do I know this?
Because sometimes, I can hear her silently crying

He tells his friends he doesn't like her
As more then a friend
But when she lost a family member
He made her laugh and smile to no end

But they have their moments
He touches her back
And she cracks a smile
They stay like that for a little while

But when do I get that chance?
To find someone who I can be happy with
Someone who'll make me laugh, and cry
Someone who'll light up the sky

Its the one thing I want
I'm silently hoping
That one day, I too
Can get my happy ending

StrongSilent
March 13th, 2011, 09:06 PM
Really, really nice. Your flow on this one is probably your best yet that you have posted. Wonderful work.

Roses_Are_Yellow
March 13th, 2011, 09:24 PM
Thanks! :)

That means a lot, I've been trying to figure out what to write, and I keptmgetting stuck...

StrongSilent
March 13th, 2011, 09:36 PM
Writers block? If that happens take a break from the project you're working on and either spend some time away from the pen or work on a smaller poem, just to get fresh ideas flowing.

Fruit_Tart.
March 14th, 2011, 03:28 AM
Great job. I like it a lot. I could picture everything happening. Sad some, but it's still great. :) Keep up the good work. ;)