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Roses_Are_Yellow
March 10th, 2011, 09:18 PM
I posted this a few days ago... But it got deleted..so... Comments are welcome :) thanks...

You tell her she's going to die
Old and alone
She's scared because
She doesn't want to be on her own

You tell her she's fat
She jokes around and smiles
When she goes home
She finds her self siting next to the toilet
Looking at the bathroom tiles

You tell her she's ugly
She kicks you and jokes
When she's all alone
She cries and croaks

She cries and cries
Until there's nothing left in her
She asks herself
' Is this going to last forever?'


She tells you a secret
Her brothers were never born
They're dead
'Why couldn't that have been you?'
Is the joke you said

She knows you don't mean harm
Any of you
It's just all those words
Make her blue


She cries and cries
Until there's nothing left in her
She asks herself
' Is this going to last forever?'

She's not too innocent herself
She's feels bad though
About all the hurtful things she's said
But she's not sure about any of you

So she slices the pain away
Slicing her memories
Slicing the tears
Trying so hard
to slice away her fears


She cries and cries
Until there's nothing left in her
She asks herself
' Is this going to last forever?'

She looks in the mirror
You know what she sees?
Something so ugly
It's her self, she believes

Once so confident
Now broken
Her pain, her grief
Is something not spoken

For she hides it well
Behind her mask
Smiling and laughing
So no one can ask

So she lives on
Pretending that she's fine
All of her fears, and worries
Are all mine

StrongSilent
March 11th, 2011, 11:49 AM
Again, + Rep. I said this before and I'll say it again, I really like this.

BrokenXPaperXDolls
March 12th, 2011, 04:19 AM
wow :D

SimSailorNick
March 12th, 2011, 08:42 AM
Incredible! I was moved and it made me think. Nice poem/story.

Roses_Are_Yellow
March 12th, 2011, 01:11 PM
Thanks everybody your comments mean a lot :)