Gloom

[HeroesAndCons]

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=2734&pictureid=16898

what u think?

[Fruit_Tart.]

wow... i think that's... amazing, but that's jus my opinion. i'm into that kinda stuff.

[darkwoon]

what u think?
I think that you need to work on:

Your anatomy: The head is way too big for the chest or arm, the shoulder is too close to the neck, the nose is "dog-like" in shape, and the hair is misplaced (not enough hair on the front, given the thickness of it on the sides, I think).

Your lines: they are "shaking" and not properly connecting to each other.

Shades: You need to keep your light source consistent. If you apply shadows on some parts of the drawing, then you must do it on every lightened surface - here, you show shadows on the face and the clothes, but not on the hair, for example.

I really think that you should (1)spend more time on your picture and draw slower, taking whatever delay you need to clean your lines or complete your colors, and (2)consider dropping computer drawing and get back to basics: white paper, black pencil, plastic eraser. You won't get good results on the computer if you don't get good results with such tools first.

[HeroesAndCons]

yeah i know it was just a thing out of boredom and it was because i was felling depressed and angry so i vented on this

[Craig1995]

I like it :) it looks really kl XD

[Weeping]

It's kinda nice, and it's awesome that you're using such things as drawing to vent! <3

[HeroesAndCons]

It's kinda nice, and it's awesome that you're using such things as drawing to vent! <3

Thanks
Im actualy starting to use coping skills better XD