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Njathind
February 22nd, 2011, 04:19 PM
This is something that I've had running through my head for a while, thought I'd finally put pen to paper. Hope you like it.

One cut
Two cut
Three cut
Four, blood is dripping on the floor

One drop
Two drop
Three drop
Four, as I lean against the door

One knock
Two Knock
Three knock
Four, they don’t know I’m laying on the floor

One kick
Two kick
Three kick
Four, they are trying to kick down my door

One pump
Two pump
Three pump
Four, they cant bring me back like before

One bleep
Two bleep
Three bleep
Four, now I am no more

Charleigh
February 22nd, 2011, 04:22 PM
Its good hun, but a little worrying lol.
Good job!
:hug:

Fiction
February 22nd, 2011, 06:21 PM
This is amazing Nat, but honestly it hurts to read knowing this is going through your head. :(

UnknownError
February 22nd, 2011, 06:37 PM
It's really good, but remember its not the answer.