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districtnowhere
February 22nd, 2011, 08:27 AM
Rain, it falls deeply, silently,
dripping off of window panes,
My head is beating violently,
the wind’s defeating me.

What, this is inside of me,
I try to hide the key.

The key that locks away,
What you can’t even dream,
the key unlocks,
What you already seen.

Revealing something, that I used to be,
deep inside of me;
Where my heart beats,
Where my heart bleeds,
Bleeds inside a misery;
This misery became a part of me,
for every one of them to see.

That bleeding misery inside of me,
revealed itself to you, to me,
it no longer sits there on the shelf,
it's out, it's there, it's sad,
She destroys herself.

But something I will always have,
Is love.
It’s found somewhere in there;
In him, In her; unite a star to share,
A brighter future; Shining there.

Charleigh
February 22nd, 2011, 08:29 AM
Nice one :'D
I enjoyed making that poem. Was ineresting :')

Donkey
February 22nd, 2011, 08:30 AM
What does it mean...?

nick
February 22nd, 2011, 08:31 AM
I like it, especially the last verse :)

Charleigh
February 22nd, 2011, 08:34 AM
What does it mean...?

Your not meant to really understand it.
Its Rok's and I's thoughts put together :')

Donkey
February 22nd, 2011, 08:35 AM
Your not meant to really understand it.
Its Rok's and I's thoughts put together :')
So it's like Dido and Eminem? Sweet, you guys should totally tour!

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x15/Canadian_Boy62/Awesome_Face_bigger.png

Charleigh
February 22nd, 2011, 08:40 AM
So it's like Dido and Eminem? Sweet, you guys should totally tour!

image (http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x15/Canadian_Boy62/Awesome_Face_bigger.png)

Lol xDD
But, with Eminem and Dido you can understand what they are talking about ... right?

districtnowhere
February 22nd, 2011, 08:51 AM
hmmm. Not really..

Charleigh
February 22nd, 2011, 08:55 AM
hmmm. Not really..

Lool.
I quite like it.
Your an awesome poet Rok :')