The Savior is The Reverser.

[The Joker]

The battle is set
The means not yet known
For the greater good, or the great unknown?
Freeing slaves of a thousand time periods
Minds being stolen and hearts gone cold
The reversal of all the damage has not yet been done.

The Savior has yet to have his second coming yet
Or has he come many times before?
The shepherds and his sheep can not yet see
Blinded like a bat by the unilateral prophecy.
The Savior is not a man per se
He has not come into a known form
The Savior's formation is quite out of the norm

The Savior is The Reverser
Of a thousand past curses
The Savior is The Reverser
The damage done by the poisonous thought nurses.

Thoughts still moving forward one step but a thousand ones back
Revolution of a beat per minute, the direction not yet known
Silent ideas turn into massive delusions
Massive delusions into unheralded conclusions.

The Savior has come so many times before
Not yet known by the man or his whore.
The Savior has come in the formation of an idea.
The Savior is The Reverser.

[deadpie]

I really like this, but there is things about it I don't like either.

The bad news is that I don't like the rhyming in stanza four. Not any rhythm to it and it just kind of throws the balance of the poem off.

The good news is that I really like the description you use, specifically the line, "The shepherds and his sheep can not yet see blinded like a bat by the unilateral prophecy."

Uh, you're getting better as a writer. Don't rush yourself when writing by the way. Read over and edit sometimes.