Kurumabiki

[deadpie]

They sheathe there swords and go on forth to death
And the river is coated in skin
Limbs hung upon the peak of mountains
March in deerskin armor and katana in hand
The moon hides it's face behind the clouds
I looked into the eyes of the beast for instruction
He clutched onto his sword and grinned back at me

Savaged villages burnt to ash
Children bludgeoned to the bones
Fields were painted with blood
And the sky burnt blue before it rained down flames

All the valleys have gone dry and the bees and the flies
Are still buzzing around the sketeton spectre's
Every mouth spitting black and corpse breeding fungus
The fish float to the top and every boat sinks below
Horseman and doctors alike have come and spread there plagues
And i've pulled out my eyes and tore out my tongue
Scratched my skin until the pain was gone
But I still hear the voices of demons moan
And humans call out from there homes
And I've emptied my stomach to move on to the grace of God
Only to find him hide paralyzed behind his golden gates
Where are you savior? Where have you fleed to?
But on bleeding knees I know now it is he that is gone.

[kevinjk]

ok.i dont get this, but ok.

[Dorsum Oppel]

All the valleys have gone dry and the bees and the flies
Are still buzzing around the sketeton spectre's

Very good line, try more rhythm like this through out your other pieces.

[Kahn]

Savaged villages burnt to ash

This line I need to talk to you about.