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kevin
April 30th, 2005, 11:52 AM
What's the point of trying anymore?
What's the point of failing?
What's the point of your dreams anymore?
What's the point of succeeding?
What's the point of being on the edge?
What's the point of dying?
What's the point of trying to live?
What's the point of living?


Wow, I was really intuitive when I made this. I'm pretty surprised I was. But I still don't like it :?

Whisper
April 30th, 2005, 08:52 PM
It's good kev I like it

Anonymous
April 30th, 2005, 10:33 PM
if u like truth: it's okayish. i dont like when people repeat alot.

white lie: IT WAS FANTASTIC!!!!!!

kevin
May 1st, 2005, 01:48 PM
I was just trying a poem pattern. Our teacher has given us a packet of different types of poem patters like limericks and haikus. But there's more unpopular ones like repeating word poem. That's the one I just did.

Anonymous
May 1st, 2005, 02:21 PM
its not bad.

Anonymous
May 1st, 2005, 02:32 PM
I like it