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MadManWithaBox
February 10th, 2011, 02:40 PM
She wasn't who I thought she was
She wasn't somebody I can trust
She walked away
With a sly smile on her lips
Leaving me to pick up the pieces of a broken life

She was a fraud, an attention seeker
She left me longing for more, but she left me to fix myself
Laughing as she walked away

I thought, at first, this was the end
I was finally done

But I found my strength
Hate, I discovered, is more powerful than love
I will not walk to my execution with bowed head
I will not give up my life without a struggle
I will stand, and I will fight

She will not beat me, the whore
I will be victorious
I will win this war

And I shall stand at the end, proud, while she burns in there wreckage of her on life

She will look up at me, and shout, save me.
I'l look down, and whisper.
No.

Charleigh
February 11th, 2011, 04:59 PM
Thats powerfull. Your good at poems (:
Keep it up (:

MadManWithaBox
February 14th, 2011, 02:04 PM
Thanks. Wasn't written in the best frame of mind though

Kitten
March 17th, 2011, 07:41 PM
really good. lots of emotion!
you should continue writing(: your good at it.

MadManWithaBox
March 21st, 2011, 04:35 AM
Thanks Kitten :)

The Madness.
March 22nd, 2011, 01:45 AM
This is still my absolute favorite poem of yours :)