charlotte945
February 6th, 2011, 09:03 PM
So this is one of my poems that i made about a year ago and i think its good but what do you think
Regret
I sit alone
and i start to wonder why
The choices i made feal so wrong
Hear i go again
Regret is taring at me
Eating at me even when i sleep
No one understands
I wate alone and wonder how could i be here right now
Everythings going down
If your out there please show yourself
The regret weakens when your with me
I don't wana be lost anymore
Regret is tarring at me
i can't even breath
Help me find myself again
Why wont you come home
Cant you see i need you
Regret is all that fills me now
Just because I'm the reson you're gone
Sooooo what do you think???????
Regret
I sit alone
and i start to wonder why
The choices i made feal so wrong
Hear i go again
Regret is taring at me
Eating at me even when i sleep
No one understands
I wate alone and wonder how could i be here right now
Everythings going down
If your out there please show yourself
The regret weakens when your with me
I don't wana be lost anymore
Regret is tarring at me
i can't even breath
Help me find myself again
Why wont you come home
Cant you see i need you
Regret is all that fills me now
Just because I'm the reson you're gone
Sooooo what do you think???????