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MadManWithaBox
January 27th, 2011, 02:25 PM
Would it be better if I left you?
If I simply disappeared and was gone.
You'd be better off without my presence in your life

I am the darkness that cowes your fire
I am a cold reality that wakes you from the dream

I thought I could save you
But I only dragged you further down

I watched my influence corrupt you
I saw your smile, once so vivid and glorious
Decay on your lips and die

I saw your mind slip away, the light leaving, piece by piece
Until there was nothing left

I left you trapped in the darkness, and I closed the door
I couldn't save you
I cant even save myself

No one will be ok
We all lose
.............
I'm sorry
I'm so sorry
I never meant for it to end up like this

I'm sorry

Magenta
January 27th, 2011, 03:44 PM
Matt, this is good. Something really... I don't know. It did get to me in an eerie way. Great work.

Charleigh
January 28th, 2011, 03:24 PM
Wow. This made me ... almost cry.
Amazing <3

MadManWithaBox
February 1st, 2011, 03:04 AM
Thanks

anamcara
February 1st, 2011, 06:14 AM
i love it xx