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Fiction
January 26th, 2011, 08:02 PM
I found this and I could just really relate to it, and I though I should share it with you all :)


Don't worry I’ll be just fine...
Please just let me slit my wrist one last time.

A broken mirror, a bleeding fist,
a silver blade against a wrist.
Tears falling down to lips unkissed;
ignore her and she won't exist.
She's not the kind anyone will miss.

Rumors are vicious, talk is cheap.
Words are malicious, secrets you should keep.
Gossip is fake, I'll make the deepest cut,
so learn from the past, and keep your mouth shut.

I walked through the hallway,
holding my wrist,
hoping no one would see me like this.
He looks at me,
scared of what he'll find. He never knew I had these things in mind.
He asks me, "are there any more?" looking at him with tears in my eyes,
I whisper,
"What do you think bracelets are for?"

1_21Guns
January 26th, 2011, 08:10 PM
this is really good Kathy, I can relate to it quite a lot too, nice find :)

Aceso
January 26th, 2011, 08:13 PM
Beautiful. <3

Njathind
January 26th, 2011, 08:13 PM
I love it :) Thanks for sharing.

Quahog
January 26th, 2011, 08:59 PM
I really like that. Such a nice piece of writing. :)

Alexithymia
January 26th, 2011, 10:11 PM
Mmm. Beautiful... and true.

Fruit_Tart.
January 26th, 2011, 11:46 PM
Wow. That was great. And it's kinda scary that I can relate to that.

TheSleepingInsomniac
January 27th, 2011, 02:08 AM
Wow this is great

FullyAlive
January 27th, 2011, 02:12 AM
This is really good I see myself in it :) or maybe thats a bad thing lol :/

REGRET
January 27th, 2011, 10:13 AM
This is beautiful, really great work (:

Noooooooooo
January 27th, 2011, 10:27 AM
I agree with the others. Good poem ^-^

UnknownError
January 27th, 2011, 11:30 AM
Nice, I like it. (:

georgiamay
January 27th, 2011, 11:40 AM
I love this, I can relate to it so easily.
Beautifully written.

Magenta
January 27th, 2011, 11:52 AM
Wow. That was haunting to read and relate to.

Weeping
January 27th, 2011, 01:01 PM
Oh my, thats an awesome poem.

Fiction
January 27th, 2011, 02:49 PM
Just checking people don't think it's my work :P

It's not and I don't want to get credit for it xD

Kitty
January 27th, 2011, 02:51 PM
omg that's amazing <3 xxxxxxx

Mike321
January 27th, 2011, 03:33 PM
Good poem, good find Kathy

enjoying_my_insanity
January 27th, 2011, 08:38 PM
great find Kathy! its beautiful

Amyxoxo
January 28th, 2011, 05:59 PM
I would take the credit for it ;)
Nice poem :)

screamtobeheard
January 28th, 2011, 11:44 PM
That's beautiful.

Charleigh
January 29th, 2011, 12:32 PM
Its sort of triggering but at the same time beautiful.
I love poems ^^

RAWWR
January 30th, 2011, 02:26 PM
It's beautiful <3