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Magenta
January 25th, 2011, 01:04 PM
A little something I just started to write down. It's more of a rhyme, I guess.

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I'm the thoughts inside your head.
I'm the one who wants you dead.

It's so easy it gives you chills.
Go on, try it- take the pills.

Quick, before the problem's bigger,
Load the gun and pull the trigger.

Hurry, it's time to end your life
So slash your wrists with the knife.

If that won't work, don't you frown.
See that river? Go and drown.

This really isn't a chance to pass,
So maybe it's time for gas.

What's that? You want to stay alive?
Once again, you only just survived.

Charleigh
January 25th, 2011, 04:37 PM
Awhh hun.
Your so good at writing poems.
:hug:
AWESOME

Magenta
January 25th, 2011, 04:42 PM
Yay! You get my first official hug smiley!
:hug:

Alexithymia
January 25th, 2011, 09:52 PM
I love it. It has a wonderful feel to it, as creepy as that sounds. <.< >.>

Weeping
January 26th, 2011, 02:47 AM
It's amazing! I felt like I "was there". I know that exact feeling.

:hug: