No name decieded

[Theone15]

I was walking home taking the dark alleys for a shortcut, that was my greatest mistake. I turned a corner then a man came into view, pale skin, long waistcoat and ... fangs! I turned and ran as far as I could, when I turned a corner. There he was. I was going to run again but he got to me faster than I could think, he yanked my hair, reaveling my neck, he plunged his fangs into my neck and that was my last day being human.
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Not sure if i want to finish it or not. :confused:

[Ryhanna]

Give it a go! Finish it :)
I think you could do something good with it.

[Theone15]

I was walking home taking the dark alleys for a shortcut, that was my greatest mistake. I turned a corner then a man came into view, pale skin, long waistcoat and ... fangs! I turned and ran as far as I could, when I turned a corner. There he was. I was going to run again but he got to me faster than I could think, he yanked my hair, reaveling my neck, he plunged his fangs into my neck and that was my last day being human.
A few years later. I sat their in my new house the blinds closed so no light could get in the room, knock knock knock, he walked towards the door, opening it slightly, avoiding the beam of light that came through the crack, "what do you want?" I asked,
"To get rid of your kind!" shouted the hunter on the other side of the door, now attempting to push it open, I slammed the door on his face, he doesn't stand a chance. I ran up the stairs faster than a snap, I heard the door get kicked down. I readied myself to fight by hiding round one of the cornerds in my bedroom, I could hear the blinds getting opened then I heard him coming upstairs, I spun round the corner punching him in the chest, he flew down the stairs, he tossed a form of grenade near where I was, the grenade exploded in a massive flash of light, I fell to the ground my skin burning.
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you will have to wait till tommorow to see what happens :irule: