No Strings Attached

[Kilometers]

I hang loosely on the last string. Slipping oh slipping very slowly. I reach desperately one last time. Until the final string has been snipped, and I tumble into darkness. Lost and forever, never knowing my way.


Do you like it? I litteraly just thought that up as i was walking up the steps hearing the word retire on the television.

[SlightlySane]

I'm not quite sure what this is supposed to be. Is it a poem, saying, what?

To be honest it lacks a bit of originality. It doesn't give me a reason that it is unique to you. It seems cliche and doesn't appear to have taken much effort. I mean this in the most helpful way possible, but if you are looking at bettering your own writing I would suggest studying up a bit on author's, writing styles, and learn about your own creativity.

[Kilometers]

I honestly am a terrible writer. I have a great imagination I just don't know how to channel it into writing.( I've got some short stories in my notebook that only seem good to me.) It most likely made more sense in my head. Also it was a quick thinking chain that lasted at least 3 seconds to put this idea in my brain. I guess this was just something that shows how insane i am and how wierd i think? You are correct it did not take a lot of time. However I don't really share my work I just keep it to myself, and i think this was a way of writing it down so i don't go crazy any more than i am:). I was never thinking about becoming a professional writer, I more fantasize about flying than writing.