pointers ?

[CassandraChaos]

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa193/PRANCER_69/IMG_9967ecopy2-1.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa193/PRANCER_69/IMG_9436copy.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa193/PRANCER_69/IMG_9601copy.jpg

Just some photos I took and edited.
I'm no professional, but I would like any pointers / critiques!
Please thanks k

[mxrider155]

these are pretty good, but my favorite would be the last one...it has good composition, lighting, depth, and just looks great :) the others are good too, the first one could be lit a little better tho. overall, great job!

[Weeping]

Those are great!

The one I have most things to say about is the first one. It really is a great picture, but it shouldn't have that "meh"-face. The thing I'd want to change most in that face is probably the eyes. They should be more opened up. Then the whole picture would get more life and 'feeling'. The eyes are really important in most portraits. Plus you could try edit the background a bit so it isn't as "spreckled".

But overall you seem like a great photographer! (:
What camera do you use?

:hug:

[Nikxta]

These are really nice, The first one : Just needs to have a focal point, shes beautiful but that facial expression looses it for me. Second One: Nice whit agaist blue, good composition but a bit cliche. Try getting out of your comfort zone. Third on: Beautiful and my favourite! DOF is really nice and subtle and the focus is nice too. well done on all three!

[heykay]

Those are pretty great!