Saving me

[Theone15]

I sat in the corner of the room my head buried in my knees, why does no one notice me, why does no care. They have left me now closing the door, only leaving the darkness with me but I heard walking outside, coming towards the room, the door opened and there he stood, long brown hair perfect brown eyes. My savior.
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what do you think

[Tristin.]

its good, good cliff hanger of an ending :)

[Charleigh]

I agree with Tristin ^^
Good workk, keep it up =D
:hug: