And closed his eyes. (Triggering, I guess.)

[UnknownError]

He lay on his bed,
Curled up in a ball,
Thoughts and memories,
Flooding his brain,
His fingers slid on the wall,
As he pulled at his hair,
He remembered.

The slight pain,
The drip on the floor,
The taste of the warm blood,
He traced the scars with his fingers.
And closed his eyes,
Hoping to stay strong,
For the next day.

Its rubbish, I know. :P

[Quick_Sylver]

Decent.. Could use a few more verses, but overall, good. :)

[UnknownError]

Decent.. Could use a few more verses, but overall, good. :)

Thanks. I wrote it at midnight last night as a distraction, so I was very tired. :P

短短字句，传达无数信息，加油~

ありがとう <3

[closed]

:) I was waiting for you to post something here XP
That really has potential. Try to give it some internal rhythm. Try to change some words or lines, so it will sound better...
Good luck with that - and i'm waiting for more!!! :D -EVIL LAUGHTER-