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Fiction
January 14th, 2011, 07:04 PM
She wanted it to end.
She wanted it all to be gone.
Everything that was her, no longer deserved to be in existence.
She was a liar, a fake, a FUCK UP.
The hate was visible, carved into her wrist,
for the thousandth time tonight.
She knew she had to do it,
she knew this was the end.
She stared at the pills.
Her hands reached out,
she read the lable.
Her mind balanced so carefully on the edge of sanity.
She twisted open the bottle lid.
One by one she took out the pills.
One by one she brought them up to her mouth.
And one by one she swallowed them.

Vonn
January 14th, 2011, 07:07 PM
I felt that one in my heart. Lovely.

MadManWithaBox
January 14th, 2011, 07:10 PM
Excellent stuff again Kathy.

Fiction
January 14th, 2011, 07:26 PM
Thanks both of you :)

Magenta
January 15th, 2011, 05:09 PM
I like it a lot. Nice job.

Fiction
January 15th, 2011, 09:55 PM
Thanks Jo.