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kevin
April 27th, 2005, 04:03 PM
Is she different?
Is he different?
Are they different?
Are we different?....
Does it matter?

I'm handing this into my teacher. It would get me a good grade if I didn't suck so much at poetry.
AC.wAkeBoArDin.06
April 27th, 2005, 04:41 PM
i would extend it by like 10 lines... but other than that... its a good start
kevin
April 27th, 2005, 04:44 PM
I really don't think I could. I sort of like this one short in a way
silentfantasy
April 27th, 2005, 06:55 PM
i kinda like it short too...it still sends out a strong message :D good job, i hope you get a good grade!!
Anonymous
April 27th, 2005, 09:16 PM
yeah you need to add more to it. more than just saying the different line. hope it helps