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districtnowhere
January 6th, 2011, 12:26 AM
Deepin' In

Close or near,
Sinking in,
Out of torture,
Compare.

Near and far,
Wishing star,
So far…

Closer, further,
Walking by.
Longer, stronger,
Want to fly.

Going deeper in myself,
Need the pain.
Thunder, lightning,
Deepin' in.

Deepest wisdom,
Fallin' in,
Sending pleasure,
Back again.

Deeper, deeper into me,
Stronger, faster,
Sinking in…

Deep inside,
It sank in,
Deep in me,
Torture, pleasure,
Come back in.

Charleigh
February 20th, 2011, 05:42 AM
To you, English is a foreign language right ... I have been speaking English for 12 years ... and I cant make up poems as good as you can.
Its amazing Rok (:
:hug: