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Nevermore
January 4th, 2011, 09:01 AM
A pill to cover the stain,
A pill to make you sane,
A pill prescribed to take the pain away.
The pills are for this, and the pills are for that,
And here is another pill to get rid of that.
The docs make you swallow until you choke,
You weren't ready for the side affects that awoke.
Swllow just swallow to take the pain away
swallow just swllow the docs will make sure you'll stay.
The pills will make you ill,
The pills will make you sick,
You'd be better off just to get rid of it.
The side affects will kill you, but everythign will be ok,
here's another pill to make sure you stay.
Pick a color pill red, yellow, or blue,
now let's see what it will do to you.
The side affects will stay, but have no fear!
Take this pill to be rid of the side affects you hate.
I'm sure we can find another pill to date.
Swallow, just swallow the pain away.
Swallow, just swallow, the docs will make sure you'll stay.
A pill to make you numb,
a pill to make you stable,
a pill to help you decide what is fact and what is fable.
When will they make a pill to make you feel alive?
This lifeless corpse wants to feel the daily jive.
Just swallow and maybe this pill will bring you to life

Charleigh
January 4th, 2011, 12:46 PM
Awww hunny thats amazing! <33
Keep hope babe, and I love the poem.
:hug:
You have a talent ;) x

Nevermore
January 4th, 2011, 02:26 PM
Aww Thank you Charlie. :) <33

Zazu
January 4th, 2011, 03:25 PM
I really like this, brilliant message behind it and nicely written :)

Syvelocin
January 4th, 2011, 09:36 PM
Reminds me of Emilie Autumn for obvious reasons :P I love it.

Nevermore
January 5th, 2011, 10:23 AM
Thank you guys! :) <3

georgiamay
January 5th, 2011, 01:12 PM
I looooooove it :P it's got a great message behind it, and it's really well written, well done :D

Nevermore
January 6th, 2011, 09:12 AM
Thank you, Georgia. :) <3 I'm happy the message was understood! This makes me so happy. :D