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Anonymous
April 26th, 2005, 10:13 PM
What if…

What would you feel?
Would you even care?
Would you think twice?
What if…

Would you be the one to cry?
Would you be the one to mourn?
Would you miss me?
What if…

Would you feel pity?
Would you feel sorry?
For the boy who was never found?
What if…

Would you ponder?
Would you wish?
For another chance to know me?
What if…

Would you feel arrogant?
Would you forget?
Who was I anyway?
What if…

Would you want?
Another chance to meet me?
Another chance to know me?
What if…

Would you remember?
Did we ever have fun?
Would you want another chance?
What if…

Would you feel?
Would you think?
What a poor boy?
What if...

Would you be the one to cry?
Would you be the one to know?
That you never even gave me a chance?
What if…

What if...that day was today?




-Ekia

Credits: Last line goes to Adam.

AC.wAkeBoArDin.06
April 27th, 2005, 04:43 PM
thats mad good... id end it strong... with a one line thing like...

Would you be the one to cry?
Would you be the one to know?
That you never even gave me a chance?
What if…

What if.... that day was today?

Anonymous
April 27th, 2005, 06:48 PM
Dude that's a great idea! I'm taking it. I knew it didn't have that "strong" ending, which is what I always like, but I didn't have time to think of one when I wrote it.

silentfantasy
April 27th, 2005, 06:53 PM
thats really good!!!

Anonymous
April 27th, 2005, 09:17 PM
it is! i agree with adam also.