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districtnowhere
January 2nd, 2011, 07:18 PM
Despise is something
that I Realised,
is my Share of life.

Life is a destruction,
of another persons try.

Connected in a sin,
do you hear the silent scream?

Screamin through the light,
destroying all the sorrows might.

Needing power,
to walk fast,
before the start,
of sorrows path.

Charleigh
April 15th, 2011, 11:48 AM
Powerful. Nice one Rok.

Nevermore
April 15th, 2011, 11:55 AM
Can you say... LOVE! <3 This is amazing!

moon_lit_angel
April 15th, 2011, 04:21 PM
wow amazing

User Deleted
April 15th, 2011, 04:23 PM
Nice! Planning on lengthening it?

deadpie
April 15th, 2011, 04:56 PM
So what's the deep meaning?

Wintergirl_80.0
April 18th, 2012, 04:31 PM
agian its gorgous!!!

embers
April 18th, 2012, 06:03 PM
agian its gorgous!!!

Hey, this thread's from April last year. Try not to post in anything older than 2 months.

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