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View Full Version : just decided to write a poem, it holds deep meaning if you know my posts.


lenny774
January 1st, 2011, 09:36 PM
Erase



I stand there with a cold metal blade,
watching as my sanity slips away
Wish i could erase myself.





I hear a faint tear,
and see crimson red
Wish i could erase myself



I think about how i hide my true self
from no one, from anyone, from evereyone
Wish i could erase myself



I hope just one day
i will have the courage
To pick up the pencil and write in whats missing.

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Hope you like it, grammar and spelling arent my best areas. rate it give feed back. i love poetry but this is the first one ive posted on vt.


(backstory on the poem: this is a self harm poem, i write poetry about it now instead of actually doing it anymore.)

Charleigh
January 4th, 2011, 12:43 PM
Awww hun ^^
That's really good! Keep writingg :D
:hug: