Wreck [Poem]

[districtnowhere]

Wreck

The skylight is dark,
We feel some love from something or some.
Everything is Falling so Sound,
Why am I down?

Crossing the Desert is hard,
Why don't I get something a Heart?
Why are all the people so smart,
Why's this so hard?

Hey! I'm screaming,
All the darkness away,
All the lights turn grey,
Help me rewind.

Hey! The birds are singing,
Telling a way,
A way to a structure of days,
Beggining a war.

My heart is a wreck,
The soul of a lion is cracked.
I see a dragon flying away,
A start of a new day.

Walking on darkness feels cold,
This is a story untold.
People go cold,
A new child is born.

I'm feeling it's cracked,
I'm feeling a wreck,
All down the fire
That burns in my head.

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So I finally got the guts to post something in here. What do you all think =)

[Tristin.]

its good :)
keep writing, you could surprise yourself :)

[Kiko]

Good job! Oh and it's "desert" not "dessert" by the way :)