Shenron
December 13th, 2010, 09:26 PM
I love you
With all my heart and soul
I love you
On my heart you take your toll
but I love you
For many months I have ignored it
Felt myself pushing ever toward it
But still I wonder if we are fated
Tirelessly hoping with breath bated
Hoping that we can be together
Forcing my heart to then weather
The ominous realization of a love which cannot be
Even though I feel as if you have feelings for me
But still there is no progress made
And into the darkness, forever I fade
In the darkness I think of you
Wondering if I can ever break through
Through the veil between our heart
And on you my love impart
Impart my love for it is mine to give
And without you I may not live
However say the word and I will be yours
My heart, to me, she then restores
And thus my heart will then soar
And I will love you forevermore
So, this is the first poem I have ever written. I was feeling down and depressed and felt like writing, so I grabbed a pen and paper and just started writing. For the most part, this just came to me, but I did make a few very minor changes.
What do you think?
With all my heart and soul
I love you
On my heart you take your toll
but I love you
For many months I have ignored it
Felt myself pushing ever toward it
But still I wonder if we are fated
Tirelessly hoping with breath bated
Hoping that we can be together
Forcing my heart to then weather
The ominous realization of a love which cannot be
Even though I feel as if you have feelings for me
But still there is no progress made
And into the darkness, forever I fade
In the darkness I think of you
Wondering if I can ever break through
Through the veil between our heart
And on you my love impart
Impart my love for it is mine to give
And without you I may not live
However say the word and I will be yours
My heart, to me, she then restores
And thus my heart will then soar
And I will love you forevermore
So, this is the first poem I have ever written. I was feeling down and depressed and felt like writing, so I grabbed a pen and paper and just started writing. For the most part, this just came to me, but I did make a few very minor changes.
What do you think?