JCake
December 12th, 2010, 05:10 AM
Just want some opinions on this, it sounds kind of weird to me. Criticisms are welcome!
As the flame's ignited;
Into the air the smoke swirls.
The illumination since destroyed,
Replaced by just ashes, the rest is void.
Beautiful is the fuel for the fire,
Bringing to life my one true desire:
To be blanketed in my love to hate
And the destruction of everything that I create.
My whole world crashes down on my shoulders,
And I drop to my knees.
Death is my only option,
There's no cure for my disease.
As the flame's ignited;
Into the air the smoke swirls.
The illumination since destroyed,
Replaced by just ashes, the rest is void.
Beautiful is the fuel for the fire,
Bringing to life my one true desire:
To be blanketed in my love to hate
And the destruction of everything that I create.
My whole world crashes down on my shoulders,
And I drop to my knees.
Death is my only option,
There's no cure for my disease.