Daddy's Little Dolly

[georgiamay]

I found this poem I wrote the other day, and realised that I've never posted any of my writting in here, so here goes. It's probably really bad, I mean, no one else has ever seen it, so I've never had any feedback.

So feedback is always appreciated :P

Daddy's Little Dolly

She's still in the day
A plastered smile across her face
Numb to the bashes and crashes
Against her fragile frame

At night she comes alive
The numbness disintergrated
Her past stuck inside her
She drives the memories away

She's Daddy's little dolly
His prized possession
She's perfect in his eyes
But in her own, she's flawed in every way

When the plastered happiness
Falls from her face
She screams and tears and destroys
Until there is nothing left to waste

She pulls at the stitching
Holding her together
And rips off the mouth
Forever sewn shut

She pulls at her hair
And lets herself fall
She's Daddy's little dolly
Broken on the floor

[MadManWithaBox]

Well by golly Georgia. I did like that very much. Not enjoyed, cos its not that sort of poem, but I did like it. Top hole stuff.

[Fiction]

Very good :D I liked the... hmm what is the word... symbolism in it?

[Harley Quinn]

imagery :P

[georgiamay]

thanks guys :3 yeah I like using imagery and symbolism and stuff, it's in quite a lot of my poems :)

[Fiction]

imagery :P

Doesn't that mean pretty much the same thing? :P