I wont take it anymore

[schrei jess]

It's kind of raw, and sorry for the cursing, I was pretty upset and this is what happened. Kind of weird, but while I was writing it, it kind of came alive as a rap song in my head, and I hate rap...but yeah, anyway here you go.

For all of you I am nothing
I don’t have feelings, I don’t have a soul
To you I am helpless
and I couldn’t possibly matter
I guess Ill never mean anything at all

Every day, it’s the same with you
Im just a stupid little bitch,
a skinny white girl, with nothing attractive
And that’s just fine
At least I’ve got a mind of my own
But if you think for one minute
that I will fall for your stupid lies
Well, you’re wrong
I know that you’re lying
and I guess you’re not so tough after all
And Im not going to listen anymore

You call me crazy
and maybe it’s true
So go tell all your friends,
because I don’t even care what they think anymore
Im tired of listening to everyone else
It’s time for me to just do for me
I don’t give a shit anymore what anyone wants
Yeah, Ill yell, is that so surprising?
Would a “FUCK YOU� shock you even more?
Good, because I just don’t care anymore

So go away, and get out of my face
Not one more insult from you,
not even one more word from you,
so just keep your mouth shut,
AND LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE!

[*Dissident*]

Bravo!!!!

[Phantom]

Awsome. That was very good

[Makod]

It was great, except, the "FUCK YOU" and "LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE" seem out of place. And, you capitalized just about all of your lines this time :D.

That didn't seem like rap either.

[mRojas2000]

I loved it... see? you should write things like that (in the way that they are awsome) to your own signature and get a 5/5 :mrgreen: