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MadManWithaBox
December 5th, 2010, 03:25 PM
She changed me:Her eye's saw :What the the other's refused to see. The mask fell from my face:She knocked down the barriers I surrounded myself with.
Her hand reached for mine, she grasped my palm, and she pulled me back from the darkness.

She was able to see: What I was not: My universe was dying, gradually perishing.

Before she came my life was:
A blackened night:
with no moon to illuminate the sky:
And no stars to light the darkness:
Then she shot across my sky:
burning as brilliantly as a shooting star:
her very presence lit the sky:
with fire, with golden, glorious fire:
the shadows lifted<
beauty and life
magical things, impossible things,
now seemed, not merely possible,
but attainable.

Then she left, and the fire burned out.
Nothing had changed, but my eyes:
now so accustomed to the light:
The darkness made me blind.

But, as she promised, she came back.

Now I could see. I was no longer blind.

Fiction
December 5th, 2010, 03:35 PM
I like :D

MadManWithaBox
December 5th, 2010, 03:38 PM
Your kindness honours me.

Sith Lord 13
December 5th, 2010, 04:03 PM
Matt, you never cease to impress me.

MadManWithaBox
December 5th, 2010, 04:09 PM
Thank you Alex :) I liked this one especially.