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Weeping
December 5th, 2010, 08:46 AM
It's starting to rain
In my eyes

The rain is running
Down my face

I don't know
What to do
MadManWithaBox
December 5th, 2010, 09:19 AM
Bit short
Weeping
December 5th, 2010, 09:23 AM
Yeah whatever just wrote what happens.. and can't get anything else out.
MadManWithaBox
December 5th, 2010, 01:19 PM
It's a good start. If you expand it, it could be awesome.