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MadManWithaBox
December 3rd, 2010, 06:33 PM
Her head was pounding
The sweat was pouring
Her fragile mind was finally ripping apart

She sat in the middle
of her bed
She held the razor
tears dripping down her face
Her fist clenched so tightly

How did it come to this?
How did she fuck up?
She loved him
She loved him so much
But she fucked up like always

She doubted herself
For one second
Then a bit more.
The doubt and crippling fear flooded in
Her fears saw
Her fears pounced.
She decided she would end it
She'd had enough
She was giving herself
She wouldn't be a burden anymore
She wouldn't piss anyone off
He'd be better off without her
She closed her eye's, the tears
Forming like Crystals
The razor came down
Her mind was gone
It reached her wrist

He stopped her
He came back
He came to her
He loved her.
He loved her with
an intensity too
Strong for cheap words
He understood her mind
he wanted to share it

It was her salvation.

Fiction
December 3rd, 2010, 06:57 PM
This just... made me cry :')

MadManWithaBox
December 3rd, 2010, 07:02 PM
I aim to please :)

Fiction
December 3rd, 2010, 07:03 PM
and manage it too :)

MadManWithaBox
December 3rd, 2010, 07:08 PM
Yay :D

Sith Lord 13
December 3rd, 2010, 07:28 PM
This... this touched something Matt. A good something. It's so sweet. :)

MadManWithaBox
December 3rd, 2010, 07:54 PM
You know what? I am that good :D

Fiction
December 5th, 2010, 06:48 AM
lol yes you are xD

MadManWithaBox
December 5th, 2010, 07:02 AM
And I'm modest as well :P

Thanks nick