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MadManWithaBox
November 30th, 2010, 12:45 PM
I was once lost. I was once alone.
I was once beaten, and desperate.

I had fought my battles
but I had lost the war.

I had looked my fears
straight in the eye.
I had risen to my feet
and prepared to die.

But my fears looked back at me.
And he laughed.

The war had been short, and brutal, and grim.
He knocked me off my pedestal
and threw me to the ground.
Now I was lost, and desperate
and never to be found, or saved.

Until one day, like a ship.
Surging through the darkness and fog.
I saw her. She cleared the sky of grey clouds.
She lit my world with a brilliant, magnificent fire,
that filled the skies and filled my heart.
She danced through my world, together,
we confronted the monsters and demons,
the paralyzing fear, was vanquished.
The things that haunted my nightmares
was defeated.

Now I turn in my slumber, full of wonder and content.
She sleep's beside me, silent, perfect, and pure.

Goodnight.

Fiction
November 30th, 2010, 01:00 PM
Aww :') Sweet :) I like it

MadManWithaBox
November 30th, 2010, 01:03 PM
Thanks. I thought so too :rolleyes:

Fact
November 30th, 2010, 01:04 PM
I like it too :D
Very sombre.

MadManWithaBox
November 30th, 2010, 01:08 PM
Sombre in the beginning. Picks up towards the end no?

Fact
November 30th, 2010, 01:15 PM
Sombre in the beginning. Picks up towards the end no?

Not really XD
I still felt depressed at the end.

MadManWithaBox
November 30th, 2010, 01:18 PM
But they were like, happy and shit :D

Fact
November 30th, 2010, 01:37 PM
But they were like, happy and shit :D

Ehh, alright then :D

The Dark Lord
November 30th, 2010, 01:41 PM
Do you write these yourself matt?

MadManWithaBox
November 30th, 2010, 01:44 PM
That I do.

Sith Lord 13
December 3rd, 2010, 03:32 PM
Awww. That was sweet.

MadManWithaBox
December 3rd, 2010, 03:39 PM
All I can do is try :D