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MadManWithaBox
November 29th, 2010, 02:31 PM
In your darkest hour, I will be there.
At the time of your greatest peril, I will remain by your side.
If you fall in the face of adversity, I will pick you up, and carry you through.
We cannot always maintain our strength, when staring face to face. Eye to eye. With that enemy that haunts our very nightmares.

If the darkness threatens
to swallow you up.
I will find you.
I will pierce the shadows,
and save you.
I will light the claustrophobic darkness with stars.
And together we'll find our way home.

Sith Lord 13
November 29th, 2010, 03:49 PM
This is really good Matt. :) Inspiring really.

georgiamay
November 29th, 2010, 04:05 PM
I like it :D Well done matt, it's really good :)

MadManWithaBox
November 29th, 2010, 04:06 PM
yay =>

Kaya
November 29th, 2010, 05:00 PM
Awesome Job!!!!!!!!!!

Fiction
November 30th, 2010, 06:33 PM
How did i forget to comment on this> :O Amazing Matt as per usual :)

laurita_21
November 30th, 2010, 06:41 PM
I think it's really rather good! Well done :)

MadManWithaBox
December 1st, 2010, 08:28 AM
Well thank you people =>