I Stand A Maze Apart

[Cosmic]

A new piece by moi. Please do read and comment; I love to hear what people think of my work - good or bad!

I Stand A Maze Apart.

Can you find it in you, to wait and wonder why,
When knocking on closed doors,
It’s not me to twist and open?

All I know is - if only based on circumstance -
Invisible dead ends will be plenty,
And directions, ambiguous.

If you have the strength within you,
Can you find the way?
Can you steel on through…
Through mistakes and dismay?

All I can say is – if only based on circumstance –
Warning will not be given,
And the guidance upon which you rest,
May collapse, and lose you in camouflage.

A falsified friendship,
With one-way effort,
I sit here waiting,
For you to give up.

[xxxShayxxx]

love it!!! im not really a good writer so i dunno if u can trust my judgement XD
but i think lots of ppl will love it. i like it because the kind of genre of poem ur writing is the kind i like :)