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Cosmic
November 17th, 2010, 10:04 AM
A new piece by me; I hope you enjoy. Please feedback with any thoughts, ideas, opinions or feelings - I'd love to hear what you think.

They Move Without Cause

They move without cause,
And war without proof,
They test without means,
Fight nail and tooth.

The tepid tracks that line cool emotion
Down broken matter, and down broken mind,
Do not leave reason, do not leave seeds
That sprout cold regret, in our kind.

A dead eye focus, on cruel contentment;
Roots grip foundations - traditions steady,
“Bleed dry the dead!” cries a callous call,
“Bleed dry the dead!” cries the lowest of all.

They move without cause,
And war without proof,
They test without means,
Fight nail and tooth.

If emotion be one,
Hatred be its name,
Bitter distraction,
Leaves nothing to claim.

Wings of Despair
November 17th, 2010, 10:09 AM
cool song

Cosmic
November 17th, 2010, 04:52 PM
It's actually a poem... but thank you - I guess it could be worked into a song! :D