My Bad Poem

[AlexVic]

This is a poem I wrote in school today while bored. It is four haiku in succession. The name of it is "Rains", and it is inspired by the short story "There Will Come Soft Rains" by Ray Bradbury.

Rains

The Soft Rains Will Fall
As The Sky Is Filled With Gray
And The House Echoes

The Great War Had Come
And As The Sky Filled With Bombs
The Humans Cowered

The House Of Workers
Tirelessly Droning On
All With No Master

And Sadly, Sadly
Once The Humans Had Perished
We Were Scarcely Missed


It may be a bit confusing without reading the inspiration first, but eh.
Let me know if you like it, which by the way I don't expect you to.

[Fact]

I quite like this :D
There's something about it that's captivating in a strange way...

[AlexVic]

I quite like this :D
There's something about it that's captivating in a strange way...

Thanks. If you liked this I would recommend you read the original story by Ray Bradbury. It's only 4 pages long and is very good in my opinion, although I am a sucker for post-apocalyptic things. :P

[Wings of Despair]

Its nice,it gives the reader a special feeling in a deep way.

[Theatheist of doom]

Good job ;D