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[Haven]

I haven't written anything lately, and I feel as though I've sort of fallen out of the groove. With that and how odd my English teacher forces us to write. :S Please comment on any ways that I can improve, but more importantly your thoughts, feelings, ideas, etc. <3 Thank you. a ton.


At wits end and ready to give up,
I looked beside me to find something.
Anything to guide me,
Anything to show me the way.
Anything to make me comfortable,
Anything to acknowledge my pain.
And then there was nothing.

Giving up on myself and the life I've had,
I looked at my future to find anything.
Something to give me hope,
Something to grasp on for dear life.
Something to help ease the misery,
Something to bring happiness to my face.
And then there was everything.

The world had been crashing around me,
Nothing had ever looked so terrible.
And just as I contemplated leaving it all,
There you were beside me.
Guiding me with comfort through my pain,
Giving me hope and happiness instead of misery.
And then you were gone.

This vicious cycle of coming and leaving,
Never looked as cruel as it does now.
You showed me a world of comfort,
Something ever so beautiful and caring.
Then you ripped it away with the slightest ease,
Tearing me apart with you as you left.
And then I was gone.

[DrkZ90]

that's really awesome, you're quite good at writing. It is a quite touching reading, I don't know how else to describe it other than awesome and touching.