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TaylorLestrangeNee
October 23rd, 2010, 09:27 PM
Your name is constantly on my mind,
on my tounge,
on my lips.
I want to get you out,
but you are always in.
I can't help but to be attached to you,
but these feelings must end.
You were always out of my grasp and
away from me,
even from the very beginning.
You will never be mine,
not now and not ever.
And its better this way.
You always broke my heart
over and over again.
But in the end I'll be you friend,
because I don't have the control
to stay away.

Haven
October 26th, 2010, 11:03 AM
It's okay. I felt like it was somewhat cliche and predictable, and it really didn't put a lot of vivid thoughts into it to make it feel like an original, emotional poem.