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Harley Quinn
October 16th, 2010, 12:18 PM
Robot

There's a robot encased in steel,
self confessed and battered.
Rusted core, a bottomless pit

Dark survival, metal casing,
sharp tenner poking through
causing uncertainty

Eyes pulped out of their sockets,
an uneasy sight to say the least
clanging shafts

Twisted kneecaps, hitting the ground
Oil spilling from it's guts
that's the blood of a robot

Pointed fingers
rusted core, pressing the surface
resuming processors

Squeaking movements,
sneaking isn't an option
when you're a r-r-robot

UnknownError
October 16th, 2010, 06:29 PM
Cool. I really like this. :)

Sage
October 17th, 2010, 04:35 PM
It's should be its. You're mixing up the possessive and the contraction.