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Syvelocin
October 5th, 2010, 10:43 AM
Bonus points to anyone who can guess where I got the inspiration.


She's paper-thin as she
bears her colorless expression
Tears plastered in their homes
below her orchid eyes

Her words are hollow echoes but her screams
are banshee cries
Her nose cannot make human sound
we mistake her sobs for leaves

Skin like a cashmere blanket
recoiling when you touch her
Her boots make no sound
she just floats like the cobwebs in your house

She's always gone before you wake
invoking your paranoia
That she really never was
her essence is the mind's hallucination

She's your desperation for
spilt lust and shallow fame
Your hopeless dreams have been answered
so you spend your nights at beauty's mercy

Coma is a whisper in the wind
a white night fantasy
Where you're forever faced
with your pallid, blank canvas

Weeping
October 5th, 2010, 11:15 AM
That's great! :D

Asylum
October 6th, 2010, 07:05 AM
i love this!!! great work!!! seriously this is awesome :D

Syvelocin
October 6th, 2010, 10:06 AM
Thanks much you two :D

Weeping
October 6th, 2010, 10:10 AM
Just telling the truth! :D