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ihaveissues2
October 13th, 2006, 04:28 AM
well this is a sort of poem i write its hardly a poem it dont rhym its just really how i feel and i was just wondering if any one at all feels like feels like evryones getting at you wen u just want to be left alone ! plz reply xxthis me
why am i like this
i dont want to be me
look atme im a mess
i donr have a fxing hope in the world
ooh yh go aheady
shout at me scream at me
try to prove to me evrythings alright
that i have got something in my life
well guess whati dont
i never did never will
these scars show how i felt befor
and now
now
the blood shows how i feel now
doesnt it you bitch
watch me wen im sleeping yh
then when i move n you see my arms
scream at me and shout at me but you
you will never be able to tell me how to feel
this is me
ME
not you
ME
remeber that

Whisper
October 15th, 2006, 10:58 PM
i'm sorry hun but i'm having trouble understanding it
can you write the full words instead of abreviating(sp?)

Self harm --> Creative Writing

Eilsel Cam
October 16th, 2006, 07:07 PM
:) I like it, It very meaningfull, Sorry you feel that way though, It describes how i feel quite well, Supose we all feel like that some times

Keep Strong

Cam

randomer
October 31st, 2006, 05:55 PM
yuo said that its hardly a poem because it doesn't ryhme but most poems dont rhyme...