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Brighter.Tomorrow
September 22nd, 2010, 09:51 PM
All Alone, It Seems Once Again.
But How Alone, To How It Seems?
Take A Deep Breath, And Let It Out.
We're All Alone, As You'll See.

Hated, Surely By Everyone.
Hate Is Everywhere, It Can't Be Denied.
Let The Tears Fall, But Pretend You Didn't.
Hates In All Of Us, It's Sad But True.

You Are You, Nothing Special.
Why Do We Care, Why Do We Listen?
Let The Razor Fall, And Forget it.
You Are Unique, Just Like The Rest Of Us.

Sage
September 24th, 2010, 10:53 PM
You should avoid typing every word with a capital letter.

Brighter.Tomorrow
September 25th, 2010, 08:13 AM
You should avoid typing every word with a capital letter.

It's a habit I have formed for poems, I think it looks better.

Sage
September 25th, 2010, 05:03 PM
I think it looks better.

Most people do not. If you're just writing this for yourself, that's one thing, but if you want it to be more presentable, I would fix that, as it hinders one's ability to read it clearly.

Paladino
September 25th, 2010, 05:47 PM
Very good poem well done.