Drunk and Disorderly.

[1_21Guns]

The room was loud,
There was a strong smell of stale lager in the air,
My vision was blurred by a haze of smoke.

The road was quiet,
There was a strong smell of blood in the air,
My vision was blurred by the haze of tears.

The pints seemed to fill up infront of you,
People danced around you,
Conversation was over flowing.

The croud seemed to fill up infront of you.
People cried around you,
Conversation was non existant.

I wished you'd stay out of the road,
I walked and cried as you stumbled that way,
I screamed when the racer shot around the corner.

You didn't even know where you were,
You didn't even know what you were stumbling into,
You didnt even know what it was, until it hit you.

I watched the croud form,
I watched the paramedics shock your lifeless body,
I watched you die.

Your eyes were black holes,
Your heartbeat was just a line even through the shocks,
You felt your breath slip away.

I never got to say goodbye,
You never heard me cry.

[nick]

That's really good Natalie. Does it come from a real experience for you?

[1_21Guns]

That's really good Natalie. Does it come from a real experience for you?

a near experience, i changed the ending XD
me my mum and my dad were all at the pub a few years ago after a funeral, he became drunk and kept falling into the road, luckily the road was dead...