schrei jess
October 6th, 2006, 04:15 PM
Everything is black
black and dying
Im a part of it
and that wont change
this black fog around my mind
it's here to stay, it wont let go
It's dragging me down
the fog ties me down
I cant leave, it wont let me leave
please just let me leave
I dont want to care anymore
I dont want to be anymore
I want to fade away
I want to waste away
You're dragging me down
making me feel guilty
just let me go
I need to go, I have to go
Why wont you let me go?
-So yeah, this poem is about depression (the black fog), and suicide, I figured that was pretty obvious but incase it wasnt, there you go :) Comments and critique appreciated!
black and dying
Im a part of it
and that wont change
this black fog around my mind
it's here to stay, it wont let go
It's dragging me down
the fog ties me down
I cant leave, it wont let me leave
please just let me leave
I dont want to care anymore
I dont want to be anymore
I want to fade away
I want to waste away
You're dragging me down
making me feel guilty
just let me go
I need to go, I have to go
Why wont you let me go?
-So yeah, this poem is about depression (the black fog), and suicide, I figured that was pretty obvious but incase it wasnt, there you go :) Comments and critique appreciated!